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I love this style of writing, because it provides a challenge and a way for me to test possible story threads, but without the labour of writing a whole, deep, complex piece. Whilst that may sound lazy, it is important to keep creative writing light and enjoyable, as wading through hours of story building can drag down the fun of creating.
The challenge of flash fiction is to build a climax, a character and a scene, all without the aid of previous character and story building. You soon find you need to be less precious with your words, as, to fit the word limit, you have to hack apart many a treasured sentence. There are many creators and competitions out there, so if this style grabs you, I would wholeheartedly urge you to join the fun!
Here are two of my favourites, that may inspire you. I hope you enjoy!
Not his job
Found – 50 words
Here are two of my favourites, that may inspire you. I hope you enjoy!
Not his job
Chapped fingers clutching car keys. A thick knitted jumper,
its hems circling her white knuckles. Her long black hair clung to her back as
she slid into her car. Sharp green eyes separated by a slender nose, with a
small mouth breathing the fog that clouded the windows. Her car, driven through
two years of college, coughed into life. Her phone chirped – that was impatient
Yasmin waiting on the steps of Cheswick Dance School. She could almost picture
her younger sister, dressed in a fluffy pink tutu, stomping and huffing in the
cold. A quirky smile pulled at the corner of her mouth, as her numb fingers
tap-tapped a response. She didn’t notice the shadow. She didn’t notice the cold
glint of metal.
At least, he thought Yasmin was the victim’s sister. The man
frowned, his forensics suit flapping slightly in the sharp wind. The victim,
(Emma Blake, her driving licence said) must have been texting when she was
attacked. He briefly imagined her, and her last few moments alive and
unsuspecting. Yes, she must have been cold. Clutching car keys, probably. Her
ebony hair, now spread out on the cement, would have stuck to her jumper. He
sighed. That was not his job. His job was to take samples from the three stab
wounds in her back.
Perfect Chaos – 175
words
There was a storm coming. Tearing up the horizon, destroying
the fields, swirling the sea into a thousand rabid dogs. Parents scoop up
children, lovers clasp hands and run. I have no one to turn to, no one to urge
to take shelter, no one to survive the storm with me. Even before the pier
empties, I’m alone with the storm. It envelopes me, filling my senses, tearing
apart my sanity as it pounds against the ground. Its hungry, impatient need
fills me. I can feel the way the waves eat the sea foam, the howling wind as it
cracks the windows. Everything has a place; even the raindrops fall where they
should. This is perfect chaos, this is freedom, this is safety.
I greet the storm like a friend, craving its embrace and
pouring my trust into its powerful presence. I stumble forwards, my bare toes
reaching the edge of the drop. I’ve waited for this for the three long years
since my “little incident.” No more
chains for me.
I smile. I jump.
One foot in front of the other. Breathe pain in, breathe
lies out. Found a gun in my pocket in a jacket I never knew I had. Found my
father, not my father, dead. Found I have one less fragment of my heart, with
every new body I shift into.
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